Hi vectornators I need of a suggest. I design this graphic as a cover for a short film about a virtual spring fashion show. The short film is located in Torino city and the title is: Turin on the catwalk. How does it look to you?
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Hi @lorenzo,
it looks great. I love the color ensemble. Maybe playing around a bit more with the flowers for a fashion show? Like a few more petals or bigger leaves. What do you think?
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@lorenzo It would also be interesting to see the result when the plant wraps around the yellow curve.
To be honest, I now think the previous version was better (I mean just the plant I asked you to change). Sorry, it was my idea 
But I really like that you added more greenery between the letters and added falling petals. Well done!
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Wow it’s really beautiful. I love all the flowers int this graphic.
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Hi guys I’m working about the poster of Fashion Show. It is not fished, I’d like to share it with you to get some feedback. The idea is to use leaves and petals (with blur effect) flying in front of the model. At moment I don’t know what put in the background. The petals and the leaves are pieces of autotraced pictures that I composed and then I applied them blur effect. Honestly I like so much the idea but I don’t know If it is well done.
P.s. I’m sorry but I can’t show the face of the model.
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I’m afraid it’s too confusing. I’m looking for a way to detach the background from the model more.
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I would probably make it more minimalistic and lighter in colors, to give the illustration more “air”. I also liked the model with the white background 
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Cool but there is something that does not convince me
I wonder if you were to either desaturate the background or make it less opaque if that would separate it from the foreground and add some depth of field to the image.
Thank you @Allatsea, I redesign the background. I thought it would be nicer to create a forest of flowers. I use the blur and brightness effects to separate the model from the background. I think now it goes much better. I would be proud of your opinion and the opinion of the other Vectornators. The goal of this post is to try to accomplish something all together as far as possible. I believe that the opinion of others is very important. It wolud be cool if also the other Vectornators also shared their projects to ask for advice on how to improve them.
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That looks great! Nice work!
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Really cool I like it very much.
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